In the writing center, me and my writing fellow mostly worked on the introduction, conclusion, and how to make my paper flow better. We focused a lot on transitions and the best ways to introduce and then sum up my argument in paragraphs. The most helpful and surprising thing to me was when I read my paper out loud. This helped me catch a lot of mistakes in my paper before she even stated helping me. It also helped me notice the places that needed to flow and go together better.
I wrote my entire introduction and conclusion and I fixed two of my paragraphs that didn't go together with transitions. This was a really good help to me to have someone else to point me in the right direction with my paper. I was quite surprised how much she didn't actually just tell me what was wrong with my paper, but she gave me advice and questions on how I wanted to improve my paper.
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