Love is like a picnic.
It's terrible when you've been waiting for food for ages,
and your stomach starts to make an abnormal sound.
gurgle,
roar.
It's the same sound your heart makes,
when your waiting for love.
Yet it is amazing when you finally get what you've been waiting for.
Even through all the pain, and struggle,
the wait was worth it,
because what you get is more amazing than anyone could ever imagine.
simile
hyperbole
onomatopoeia
I liked you poem. I liked the non- visuals you gave
ReplyDeleteGood use of simile and rhythm. I like the message behind the poem.
ReplyDeleteYou use great visuals that make the poem come alive. This is a great topic and the message is good.
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